6/2/2016
Dear mr.kelada
hi how are you ?
Mr.kelada I hope that you feeling better today
Are you remember me?
I'm Mrs.ramsay I wrought this letter because I want to apologize to you
I do not blame you about your behavior you just behave normal and the way that you like.
Now let me tell you about my pearls necklace
I want to thank you.
When my husband challenge you that the pearls are unoriginal you accepted this challenge
I leaned many things from you
mrs.ramsay

This is good. You still need to work on your grammar, but I like what you wrote.
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